Comments on: SAINT TINA MARIE http://davejarecki.com/blog/2009/08/saint-tina-marie/ An online journal by Portland writer, Dave Jarecki Thu, 15 Dec 2011 18:45:01 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1 By: Glen http://davejarecki.com/blog/2009/08/saint-tina-marie/comment-page-1/#comment-8857 Glen Mon, 12 Oct 2009 06:58:48 +0000 http://davejarecki.com/blog/?p=1269#comment-8857 Perfect work! Perfect work!

]]> By: Jill http://davejarecki.com/blog/2009/08/saint-tina-marie/comment-page-1/#comment-8013 Jill Fri, 14 Aug 2009 19:01:23 +0000 http://davejarecki.com/blog/?p=1269#comment-8013 Your use of A is subtle, but so effective. The image of this woman is so visual. I can almost feel her fervor/anxiety. The last two lines are my favorites. Your use of A is subtle, but so effective. The image of this woman is so visual. I can almost feel her fervor/anxiety. The last two lines are my favorites.

]]> By: kristen http://davejarecki.com/blog/2009/08/saint-tina-marie/comment-page-1/#comment-8005 kristen Fri, 14 Aug 2009 06:26:02 +0000 http://davejarecki.com/blog/?p=1269#comment-8005 Amazing, as usual, Dave. Love the reference to St. Al's parish. Definitely a haunting piece. Amazing, as usual, Dave. Love the reference to St. Al’s parish. Definitely a haunting piece.

]]> By: wayne http://davejarecki.com/blog/2009/08/saint-tina-marie/comment-page-1/#comment-8004 wayne Fri, 14 Aug 2009 05:26:23 +0000 http://davejarecki.com/blog/?p=1269#comment-8004 good one...i like the wine drunk hair ....very merlOt good one…i like the wine drunk hair ….very merlOt

]]> By: carolee http://davejarecki.com/blog/2009/08/saint-tina-marie/comment-page-1/#comment-8003 carolee Fri, 14 Aug 2009 03:54:29 +0000 http://davejarecki.com/blog/?p=1269#comment-8003 this line is an excellent example of doing this skillfully: "There, the patron saint of Gaston Isles would hang" the repetition is musical. this line is an excellent example of doing this skillfully:

“There, the patron saint of Gaston Isles would hang”

the repetition is musical.

]]> By: Linda http://davejarecki.com/blog/2009/08/saint-tina-marie/comment-page-1/#comment-8001 Linda Fri, 14 Aug 2009 02:09:37 +0000 http://davejarecki.com/blog/?p=1269#comment-8001 Hello Dave, This is my first visit to read your poetry and I would agree that your "A" poem has some very thought provoking imagery. I like the way it scrawls around the floor and the shadow hides. Very well written post, I enjoyed my visit here. Thank you. Hello Dave, This is my first visit to read your poetry and I would agree that your “A” poem has some very thought provoking imagery. I like the way it scrawls around the floor and the shadow hides. Very well written post, I enjoyed my visit here. Thank you.

]]> By: Jessica GC http://davejarecki.com/blog/2009/08/saint-tina-marie/comment-page-1/#comment-7999 Jessica GC Fri, 14 Aug 2009 01:40:34 +0000 http://davejarecki.com/blog/?p=1269#comment-7999 Oh the imagery! So good... so, so good! Oh the imagery! So good… so, so good!

]]> By: Via Negativa http://davejarecki.com/blog/2009/08/saint-tina-marie/comment-page-1/#comment-7997 Via Negativa Thu, 13 Aug 2009 22:01:04 +0000 http://davejarecki.com/blog/?p=1269#comment-7997 [...] DaveJarecki.com Avenue A was the first place I’d look for Tina when she disappeared. It wasn’t anything psychic. I knew her haunts by the way she’d crawl around the parquet floor scrawling loops with bisecting pens, muttering Sweet Jesus what will our Christian soldiers do now that the war had wound to a hault? —- This entry was posted Thursday, August 13th, 2009 at 6:00 pm and is filed under Smorgasblog.  Print [...] [...] DaveJarecki.com Avenue A was the first place I’d look for Tina when she disappeared. It wasn’t anything psychic. I knew her haunts by the way she’d crawl around the parquet floor scrawling loops with bisecting pens, muttering Sweet Jesus what will our Christian soldiers do now that the war had wound to a hault? —- This entry was posted Thursday, August 13th, 2009 at 6:00 pm and is filed under Smorgasblog.  Print [...]

]]> By: Dave http://davejarecki.com/blog/2009/08/saint-tina-marie/comment-page-1/#comment-7996 Dave Thu, 13 Aug 2009 21:59:28 +0000 http://davejarecki.com/blog/?p=1269#comment-7996 God, this is beautiful. Mythic. Heart-breaking. God, this is beautiful. Mythic. Heart-breaking.

]]> By: Dave Jarecki http://davejarecki.com/blog/2009/08/saint-tina-marie/comment-page-1/#comment-7993 Dave Jarecki Thu, 13 Aug 2009 17:51:20 +0000 http://davejarecki.com/blog/?p=1269#comment-7993 Thanks Julie - Can't say I know a Bob Jarecki, but that's not to say we're not related. Feel free to pass my name along. There aren't too many of us around, and I'm sure, in one way or the other, we all go back to the same Eastern European spring. Thanks Julie –

Can’t say I know a Bob Jarecki, but that’s not to say we’re not related. Feel free to pass my name along. There aren’t too many of us around, and I’m sure, in one way or the other, we all go back to the same Eastern European spring.

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