BLUE BLUR

The following is poem number 8 of 2009’s NaPoWriMo – 30 poems in 30 days during the month of April. The original prompt was, “purple crystal wavy blue”.


BLUE BLUR

My students don’t care about tomorrow’s rain.
When I say it’s a false spring they ask
what’s false, what don’t I see?

They’re off at the door where I watch, sure
one of them will break an arm,
run head long into a pole,

bowl someone over near the slide.
They disperse in packs,
two-by-two into the trees,

teeter-totters, swarm to the merry-go-round,
push out of breath until it and them
are the same thing –

a blue blur that spins clockwise with the earth
until the sky sucks down,
lifts them home.

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3 Responses to “BLUE BLUR”

  1. Courtney says:

    False spring? I prefer practice spring.

  2. RECESS | Dave Jarecki's Blog says:

    [...] The following is poem number 22 of 2009’s NaPoWriMo – 30 poems in 30 days during the month of April. The original prompt was, “outdoor play”. It feels like a bookend to poem #8, BLUE BLUR. [...]

  3. AndrewBoldman says:

    Hi, cool post. Thanks for writing.

 
 

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